I want to know about the girl in the picture. In the last line or so of the excerpt you can actually tell me where she is, but lead up to it with the rest of your writing. For example, if it is January in Alaska, words like cold, shiver, sweaters, etc. could be used. Hopefully that makes sense.
Sorry if this is a bit crappy. I thought the post was going to be about the girl in the description of the post (see above), put it was about the girl in the picture. Sorry!
I looked around. I felt very out of place. The Doctor told me to stay put, and when he tells you to stay put, you stay put. I looked out the window. There were trees, and they looked like regular trees. Regular plants, regular everything. Everyone here looked human, but that didn’t mean they were. Well, they looked human aside from some slight differences. But nothing too large.
People kept staring at me because of my long, ginger hair. It was like I was an alien.
But I wasn’t an alien.
None of us were aliens.
We were in an alternate universe, after all. They were all humans, right?